Some Girl

Rookie - 241 Points (May 05)

Days Past - Poem by Some Girl

my mousey hair
has turned to gray
my looks have faded
you didn't stay

my body is older
and my scars are deep
i slowly changed
and your love began to seep

time flew by
the talk wasn't real
i accepted the change
that you didn't feel

the moments we had
changed to days
the love we shared
soon began to fade

you moved on
for the moment i stayed
you looked ahead
to a good looking day


Comments about Days Past by Some Girl

  • Gold Star - 7,748 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/29/2013 10:00:00 PM)

    It's touchy!
    You may like to read my poem 'Her Fears' and offer your comment please. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 17, 2013


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