Dead Abstractions Poem by Ryan John Payne

Dead Abstractions



I watch dead abstractions struggling to survive,
Resurrecting their skeletal illusions.
Bland words shrug bleakly on each passive page
And fancy themselves as exclusions.
I bind them as I find them as fast as I can,
And reverse those uncalled-for delusions.
If only I could perfectly inhibit their stance
I would then try vernacular transfusions.
When wishful words waking up in white worlds
Blatantly blare their woeful conclusions,
I replace each abstraction with eloquent grace
To imprint an everlasting infusion.
They slither off the page that they once had enslaved,
And brilliant new phrases applaud in profusion.

Saturday, March 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: words
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was taking a creative writing course several years ago and my professor told the class that he wanted to see poetry without any 'dead abstractions, ' as he liked to call it- words that were too vague and didn't help the reader's imagination. I was inspired by that and decided to write a poem about that very thing. This is the result.
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Ryan John Payne

Ryan John Payne

New Mexico, United States
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