Pablo Cruise


Dead Poet's Mind - Poem by Pablo Cruise

Fractured lines half realized
From where to lips to pen
Dead poets mind to spill a page
Flesh the colors from my skin
These strokes in metaphoric case
Casting light where none is found
The dye of composition twists
To open eyes to seal a wound
Symbiotic rhymes drift in dreamless haze
Unpolished and rank they permeate anew
Captions of some unfinished piece
From someone else’s empirical views
With each consideration their voices sound
In spelled consequence
Countenance shaped by another’s hand
Compelled in silent alliance
Dead poet’s mind in anxious escape
Replace me in my stead
I pray for sake and sanity
You are the voices in my head


Comments about Dead Poet's Mind by Pablo Cruise

  • Rookie Elizabeth Barry (2/26/2010 7:18:00 AM)

    Hi a lovely read and the last two lines grabbed my heart! very enjoyable well done, magical to read and it read well!

    thanks elizabeth (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 2 Points Wojja Fink (3/22/2009 4:36:00 PM)

    You are the voices in my head...
    better than the living dead.............great read Pablo.....John (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 85 Points Mark R Slaughter (3/18/2009 10:04:00 AM)

    Stunning blend of metaphors Pablo - got me thinking!

    Mark (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (3/18/2009 9:15:00 AM)

    Lovely poem....so many similies and metaphors beautifully weaved. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (3/11/2009 9:18:00 AM)

    very nice a
    pleasure to read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points premji premji (3/11/2009 3:33:00 AM)

    poet dead or alive...superactive in your poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (3/10/2009 10:24:00 AM)

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    This is I suppose never easy to read a Poet's mind.Yet I find I can relate with your thoughts somewhere.
    I find myself among the debris my unfinished thoughts and never written titles.
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  • Rookie Ershad Mazumder (3/9/2009 11:00:00 AM)

    Its really a super excellant poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 47 Points Meggie Gultiano (3/3/2009 5:51:00 AM)

    this is nice and well written.thanks for this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (3/3/2009 5:06:00 AM)

    Well written and shows the angst of a poet's mind,
    10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 731 Points Ency Bearis (3/3/2009 2:41:00 AM)

    demised mind of the poet enliven by your write here..great poem...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (3/2/2009 11:49:00 PM)

    Well penned yet needs refinement. Nice and beautifully crafted. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 270 Points Kesav Easwaran (3/2/2009 9:38:00 PM)

    good piece Pablo...poems are poems...once born out, i believe, they are beyond edit...like God's own creations...genuine with their good and bad sides inbuilt...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (3/2/2009 9:03:00 PM)

    A dead poet's mind is alive in this poem. A good poem in all aspects. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aldo Kraas (3/2/2009 4:04:00 PM)

    That poem is a master piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (3/2/2009 2:42:00 PM)

    Excellent write Pablo...excellent to read...thanks...10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (2/26/2009 1:57:00 PM)

    Words placed here are one of a natural, nice job (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 25, 2009



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