Dead Poet's Mind Poem by Pablo Cruise

Dead Poet's Mind

Rating: 5.0


Fractured lines half realized
From where to lips to pen
Dead poets mind to spill a page
Flesh the colors from my skin
These strokes in metaphoric case
Casting light where none is found
The dye of composition twists
To open eyes to seal a wound
Symbiotic rhymes drift in dreamless haze
Unpolished and rank they permeate anew
Captions of some unfinished piece
From someone else’s empirical views
With each consideration their voices sound
In spelled consequence
Countenance shaped by another’s hand
Compelled in silent alliance
Dead poet’s mind in anxious escape
Replace me in my stead
I pray for sake and sanity
You are the voices in my head

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 02 March 2009

Excellent write Pablo...excellent to read...thanks...10++

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Aldo Kraas 02 March 2009

That poem is a master piece

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 March 2009

A dead poet's mind is alive in this poem. A good poem in all aspects.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 March 2009

good piece Pablo...poems are poems...once born out, i believe, they are beyond edit...like God's own creations...genuine with their good and bad sides inbuilt...10

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rago rago 02 March 2009

Well penned yet needs refinement. Nice and beautifully crafted.

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Elizabeth Barry 26 February 2010

Hi a lovely read and the last two lines grabbed my heart! very enjoyable well done, magical to read and it read well! thanks elizabeth

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Wojja Fink 22 March 2009

You are the voices in my head... better than the living dead.............great read Pablo.....John

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Mark R Slaughter 18 March 2009

Stunning blend of metaphors Pablo - got me thinking! Mark

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Sathyanarayana M V S 18 March 2009

Lovely poem....so many similies and metaphors beautifully weaved.

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Eyan Desir 11 March 2009

very nice a pleasure to read

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