Dear Dad Poem by LUZAAN de Bruyn

Dear Dad

Rating: 5.0


AT NIGHT WHEN I LOOK AT THE MOON,
I KNOW YOU LOOK AT IT TO
THEN I WISH I COULD SEE YOU SOON.
WE ARE VERY FAR APART
BUT YOU WILL NEVER LEAVE MY HEART
WHEN I WAS BORN YOU WERENT THERE
ALTHOUGH MOTHER NEEDED YOUR CARE
YOU WERE YOUNG I KNOW
BUT WHY DID YOU LEAVE US?
YOU TOLD PEOPLE YOU WILL STAY WITH MOTHER
BUT WHEN SHE TOLD YOU SHE'S PREGNANT
YOU DIDNT EVEN BOTHER
THEN MOTHER REMARRIED
AND SOON ANOTHER BABY SHE CARRIED.
MY NEW FATHER LOVED ME
AND LOOKED AFTER ME LIKE I WAS HIS OWN
NEVER WOULD HE LEAVE US ALONE
IM NOT MAD DAD
IM JUST REALLY SAD
BECAUSE A STRANGER COULD CARE FOR ME
BUT YOU, I DIDNT EVER HEAR FROM OR SEE
HOW COULD THAT BE? ?
REMEMBER ALTHOUGH WE ARE APART
DAD, YOU WILL NEVER LEAVE MY HEART! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 19 December 2008

this is really touching I have a step dad and he has taken care of me for most of my life. this is good. you put your heart into it and sometimes that is the best poetry. Becca

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C. P. Sharma 19 December 2008

You outpour your heart and that becomes your poem as this one. Lovely, keep it up. Technicalities can be taken care of later. Keep it up. CP

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Annie Girl 18 December 2008

this is a wonderful poem its so i dont know i have no words keep up the good work

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Lynda Robson 17 December 2008

A heartfelt write Luzaan, it shows a longing to know your roots,10 Lynda

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 December 2008

a very touching poem Luzaan , it shows your kind heart *10*

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