Dear Dad, I Love Her Poem by Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)

Dear Dad, I Love Her

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I remember
The last time I spoke with you,
You asked and begged me
To do you a favour

You looked at me
With so much pain in your eyes
I would bet you wanted to cry
But a man like you was stronger than tears

You smiled ironically
And i felt the relief
And you went on to touch my head
And whispered in my presence
'When I Am Gone son,
Please Take A Good Care Of Your Mother for Me'

My heart beat so fast
That you declared a possibility
Of living me behind
And I thought I will never see you again
You Left me behind!
And I never saw you again
But i remember the last moment we had


Today I remind myself
And I take an opportunity
To account on the mission you gave me
And re-instate the promise
That I will always take care of you wife
Not because I love her, but because I love you too


I am proud
To have kept the promise thus far
And till I see you again,
I will give you the feedback
And you shall never live me behind again

'Dear dad
I still remember your words'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 18 June 2012

o...almost in tears... nothing i hv to write this write......has a lot of you! !

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Jinal Oswal 14 May 2012

Its so nice to see someone who knows his responsibilities and who knows the worth of a relation... Its a nice and a sad write... though it gives kind of inspiration.. thanks for sharing a nice thought like this one.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 13 May 2012

Bra Anele, this poem of yours got my heart sore, I had a lump in my throat...never even for one day forget to take care of her, she is a lucky lady to have you as her son..thanks bud for such a profound message!

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Dave Walker 13 May 2012

A sad and beautiful poem, really feel this one.

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Joshua Zwane 09 May 2012

dawg...wow.painful but mostly encouraging.beautiful write man!

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

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South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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