Dear Diary Poem by Brooke Luchich

Dear Diary

Rating: 5.0


Dear diary, today I met a boy and I can’t get him off my mind,
I’ve never met anyone like him; he’s really one of a kind.
I get butterflies every time he flashes a gorgeous smile at me,
Tomorrow I’m going to get the courage to talk to him... maybe.

Dear diary, nothing can bring me down, my day was more than great,
You would never guess what happened, he asked me on a date.
Oh my god this is so exciting what am I going to wear,
I have to get ready, where are my shoes? How am I going to do my hair?

Dear diary, out of the best days ever last night is definitely number one,
We went out to dinner and walked along the beach, I had so much fun.
I really like this boy and I think he might actually like me too,
I can’t believe this is happening; it’s just too good to be true.

Dear diary, oh wow it was amazing, today we had our first kiss,
There’s no way to describe it other than pure and total bliss.
He said he had to ask me something, and my heart skipped a beat,
He asked me to be his girlfriend, and suddenly I felt complete.

Dear diary, all the joy in the world can’t compare to how I feel today,
He told me that he loves me, I felt like I was going to float away.
Now I know how he feels I’m no longer scared to give him all of me,
I’ve never felt this way before, so it has to be right, it must be.

Dear diary, last night was better than anything I have ever felt,
The way he spoke to me and held me was enough to make me melt.
I want to be with him forever and last night made that clear,
This boy completes me and I never want this feeling to disappear.

Dear diary, he seems so distant I don’t know what I’ve done wrong,
He was the one saying the other day how our relationship was so strong.
Working through things is part of what being in love is all about,
So I’ll talk to him tomorrow, I know that together we can sort this out.

Dear diary, I feel so stupid, I should’ve been more careful from the start,
He used me until he got what he wanted then left me with a broken heart.
He’s a cheater and a liar but a playa is the most common name,
Don’t let these boys fool you and don’t get caught up in the game.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 15 March 2018

A fine start with a nice poem, Brooke. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Kyrsten Gaddis 16 June 2009

I enjoyed reading this poem. Good Lyric poem. Love the way you showed how the female mind often thinks. Brilliant.

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Lucero Flores 16 June 2009

I liked that peom, It spoke the truth that is how guys get what they want

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Angela Lam 16 June 2009

i liked the way you wrote this poem. & how you expressed your feelings in a way that the reader could relate to them.

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Jasjiv Singh 16 June 2009

i liked the way you rhyme, i like rhyming too. Also your poem had a sad ending which for me completed it. Good work.

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