Death Poem by hamid kareem

deep... its good though..rlly good! .

'give me time to die in time'. what a fantastic poem. I have never tasted such a beautiful peom about death. simple words in a simple way., but the depth of the poem cannot be measured. so nice

this is such a great piece....dude....you killed this one. It is rich with every element of poetry in its finest blend......A hat off for you on this one.

again this is a great poem...u used such average everyday words and yet...u got ur point across so well. To ba able to write such a great poem about such a broad subject shows how much talent u truely have

Wow.You did not disguise the real meaning of death..like it

Your poem seems to have a very in-dept meaning for so few words...i liked the way you personified death...very lovely

Excellent poem. You are wise beyond your years.

liked this poem really brought out this feeling loved it

beautiful poem! I especially enjoyed the part about cuts unseen! ~Lacey~

Thanks for your comments on my poems. I read your poems and they are unbelievable great. I cant believe it and all. You are a true poet Kareem