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Min Sia (11/9/2008 12:15:00 AM)
I love reading poems about the reality of death. This poems will certainly be one of my favorite. It's great! A masterpiece! ! ! |
Palas Kumar Ray (10/4/2008 1:28:00 PM)
Death marches every minute...............
We all hear it comes, but pretend to be deaf................
Don't you speak of the time Ashraful?
10++ |
Rinzu Susan Rajan (10/2/2008 2:23:00 AM)
DEATH WUD NEVER SEND AN SMS...IT WILL COME TO ALL OF US AND WE WOULD NEVER KNOW...
BUT UR DESIRE TO KNOW DEATH CAME OUT IN THE FORM OF NICELY PENNED THOUGHTS...
:) |
Lenox Brown (10/1/2008 8:22:00 AM)
hey man. this poem is a good attempt to explain death. i do think its a little short and the short sms thing did not cut it for me. i could give you a 7. |
Gargi Saha (9/27/2008 4:23:00 AM)
A nice way of expressing the arrival of death.
Thanks for your nice comments on my poems The Birth Of Christ &Misery Misery Everywhere. |
kandis salasar (9/21/2008 1:00:00 PM)
i agree with Obed, the elixer of life is change, from dying we grow, death is the instructor...great poem. you write well. |
Priya luv (9/21/2008 8:08:00 AM)
hai..tnx even ur poem is jus luvly........can u help me..actually i ryt short stories but i hav no idea which is a correct site that could help me 2 express my stories...do know any? if u do i would b glad |
Reshma Ramesh (9/18/2008 8:17:00 AM)
wow neat............. |
Mehmet YILMAZLAR (9/18/2008 4:02:00 AM)
i didnt imagine as that |
Aijaz Asif (9/17/2008 7:40:00 AM)
Death O death
when will you come..
an impressive write on death bravo....
a true love is on its way
commig to take my soul away |
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