Death Poem by gary hicinbothem
Death
Death is in my life,
as my love one departs,
why did my life start,
grad the switch blade then slam it through my heart,
my life is really hard,
I can’t do nothing right,
why did she leave my sight,
death is a feeling of permanent scars,
sadness and pain,
everybody plays the suicidal game,
the death of my loved one is gone forever,
has me morbid and afraid,
depression is something that everyone goes through,
I will suffocate myself farther,
then when my face turns blue,
nobody knows my feelings,
they don’t have a clue,
I want to die,
what about you
It's sad when a loved one dies. I suppose it's even harder to watch them die though. Awesome poem. I like it alot.
everyone does get depressed, this is another powerful write, but just because you lose someone physically, doesn't mean they aren't there.. i dont kno who you loss, but everyone everyday deals with loss, this poem shows great description of how you attempt to cope with yours.. it scares me though to be honest
the poem isn't bad, but you really must spell check before you submit
sometimes I feel as if I wanna die... but then again I am so busy hiding behind my mask that I dont notice any more. it is good to leave your reader with a question. good job. Crystal
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 9:48:24 AM # 1.0.0.1119
so sad so painful nice piece