Death Poem by Natasha Ligons

Death

Rating: 3.3


DEATH.
DEATH IS WHEN YOU LEAVE THIS WORLD,
DEATH IS WHEN YOU HAVE REACHED YOUR FINAL DESTINATION,
DEATH IS WHEN YOU SAY GOOD BYE TO YOUR LOVE ONES
DEATH IS WHEN YOUR MEMORIES ARE JUST GONE,
DEATH IS WHEN YOU ARE ALONE,
DEATH IS JUST A FINE WAY OF SAYING GOOD BYE,
DEATH IS ANOTHER WAY OF SAYING HI,
DEATH IS JUST A PART OF LIFE,
YOU COME INTO THIS WORLD DYING,
AND YOU GO OUT LIVING,
YOU COME INTO THIS WORLD ALONE,
AND YOU GO OUT WITH A CROWD,
DEATH IS JUST A SWEET PART OF LIFE,
DEATH IS JUST A SOMETHING OUT OF RIFE,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 March 2009

Some say death is the beginning of another life. You have written some thought provoking words about death. Greenwolfe is right last two lines are unnecessary, nice write otherwise. Best Wishes Naseer

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 February 2009

There are some very good lines in here. Some are not so good. I'm not sure that you need the last two lines. GW62

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Natasha Ligons

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