Death-A Look Of Love Poem by Mary Mc Creath

Death-A Look Of Love

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A look of love was what he gave to me
A look of love came from me in return
How could he now be gone to never more
Exchange with me that look I held so dear
A rage now came instead upon my soul
That God could take this joy away from me
I ached and longed to see him one more time
How dare HE take this gift away from me
I stop my grief now high and full of pain
And flay my fists upward to the sky
You give him back how dare you take him now
You give him back he is not yours but mine
That empty sky was deaf unto my plea
The emptiness descended now on me.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written when reflecting on the death of my 8 month old brother James when I was 4 years old. I was living in Hopeman in the North of Scotland at the time. On the way home from school, I stopped in the middle of a field and was overcome by grief and anger at the thought of going home and not finding him there. My mother told me that God had taken him to heaven. I was angry at Him for doing this.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Qiniso Mogale 04 June 2017

The emptiness descended now on me. A wonderful poem Mary!

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Pheko Motaung 20 June 2012

A great love poem! The beauty and the treachery of love and the resultant emptiness that comes...all beautifully and soulfully said! You're the best ever poet.Thank you very much

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Mary Mc Creath

Mary Mc Creath

Glasgow, Scotland
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