Death- Close Your Eyes Poem by ayam Rose Estelle

Death- Close Your Eyes

Rating: 3.8


Crimson falls,
And the loved ones all bawl.
The silent Twilight's call.
The man upon the gray rock comes,
To wrap the world in dark.
The starry bog comes to clear the room,
Knowing a soul is doomed.
A lullaby by the cricket, he sings,
'Love, isn't always something that you must bring.
It shows in all of everything.
Love is from the heart,
As it always has been from the start.'
Dusk has gone,
What has come is dawn.
The world is filled with light.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leila Mass 18 June 2010

This is really good I like it. I know that being young (I'm the same age as you) makes people not take you as seriously but that shouldn't stop you from writing :) feel free to read any of my poems.

0 0 Reply
David Hayes 12 June 2010

Not bad, I like it!

0 0 Reply
Broken Heart 07 June 2010

Nice poem! !

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success