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Death is when your loved ones must depart
Death is a sharp pain to the heart
Death is a feeling of permanent sadness and pain
Death is when your loved ones have forever gone away
Death is a call to heaven or hell
Death is an eternal mansion or cell
Death is a lesson to learn about
Death is a loss, without a doubt
Death is an unhappy feeling to have
Death is unpleasant on anyone's behalf
Death is something we all will go through
Death is a storm waiting to brew
Death is a lingering crow always overhead
Death is a soul, done being fed
Copyright © Rebekah Johnson (Age 12)
Rebekah Joh
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Sunday, May 04, 2008 |
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Tuesday, November 18, 2008 |
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Bantu Ngcephe (6/30/2009 6:02:00 AM)
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What a deep emotion out of this poem..i love it!
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Alyssa Drum (3/6/2009 8:36:00 PM)
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I relly know what your saying beck
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*Trusting You* (12/16/2008 8:41:00 PM)
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Death is a lingering crow always overhead
Death is a soul, done being fed
those are Fantastic lines. this is written very well. good job.
Becca
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Andile Panda (12/10/2008 11:46:00 AM)
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hey man i love ur work
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Lauren Soley (11/27/2008 2:32:00 PM)
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i think tht this poem is really emotional
gd for u rebekah u are going to go somewhere
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Antony Mndawe (11/20/2008 2:49:00 PM)
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really death is a permanent feeling of sadness you have to live with it, nice keep it up.
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Tissa Calvert (11/20/2008 10:23:00 AM)
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very very meaningful keep it up.
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Karol Valencia (11/18/2008 1:28:00 PM)
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This poem was really really good. I enjoyed it a lot. I know what it feels like to lose a person and your poem really tell how it feels. Good Job!
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Albert Fernandez (11/12/2008 5:30:00 PM)
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i agree this is a really GREAT and i mean GREAT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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