Death - Moving On Poem by Lyn Paul

Death - Moving On

Rating: 3.3


Death is not meant to be bad
Although incredibly sad
Even though I have gone
I now have moved on
And will remember the time that we had




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Death - Moving On
Wednesday, August 1, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: death,goodbye,sadness,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elaine March 21 November 2012

wonderfuly true, death is not bad, sad but not bad

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Thomas Cox 31 January 2013

nice way of putting it...death that is...

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Michael Walker 16 August 2019

A most touching photo and elegy.

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2017

is this written by a dead person? i do not find death sad, in the traditional sense of sad. i do find a tear coming to the corner of an eye at rare times when i see a movie or read a book which moves me. But to have a 'loved one' die would not make me sad, in my experience. People will call me weird perhaps. that 's ok with me, ....as long as they don't CALL ME 'late for supper'. i don't believe in an afterlife/life after 'death'. but if such a thing exists, i only want to remember enjoyable things. and a loved one may be included in that category. if this poem is part of your personal belief system, i hope your future experiences with death are all more enjoyable than sad. in the mean time: Eat, drink, and be merry! ! ! bri ;)

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2016

Life and death! Being part of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shahzia Batool 30 April 2013

many things are coming to mind... yes, death is a sad case but not if one has spent a life worth-living, if one lived for others more...death is bad only for those who lived for themselves...! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 22 February 2013

Death is inevitable! Expressed very nicely. Loved.

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