Death Of A Suicidal Lover Poem by Kyle Jones

Death Of A Suicidal Lover

Rating: 5.0


Arm in arm,
Nearly frozen,
Her heart pulses harm,
Like the night his was stolen,
Blood-red, black beneath
Like the starlight, her loveless blood ran cold,
Cutting into the wrists he used to hold

He held the raft
But she grabbed the anchor,
He saw it was his love, the weight that sank her.
The love they'd never show
Look who's still breathing
But you should also know
He's now the one bleeding

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

thats deep. i can somehow relate.10

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Nangula Immanuel 13 April 2009

Deep! real nice! very well written kyle!

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Callie Valentine 20 April 2009

Wow, this is really good. I love it.

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Jaci Burns 13 May 2009

meaningfull, amazing and touching. WOW

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Kyrsten Gaddis 22 May 2009

Amazing poem. Love it

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It's deep and catches me off guard. Such strong emotions, it's an AMAZING piece. I loved it.. Keep up the good work. -Trysta

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Camelia Boujalais 16 November 2009

I really love love, , this poem. And i enjoy reading all of your writings. You are so talented and bound to go far my larrrvelly: -) luvs it! !

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DEE RAAIN 01 November 2009

WOW so awesome being 18 i know how this feels. :) SO NICE! !

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Ashley LeBlanc 30 October 2009

woooow! beautiful! really, your words are so passionate, and flow together so well!

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Emily Maddison Saffron...x 02 September 2009

wow your really good... thats really deep but good and really sad...! !

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Kyle Jones

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Tegucigalpa: Honduras: Carribean
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