Deceitful Love Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Deceitful Love

Rating: 5.0


His love is like
The silvery dew that
Clings on soft petals
Of lovely flowers
So fleeting as the air
That touches
A beautiful face.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin,All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 08 August 2020

Excellent writing and such a perfectly presented and beautifully imagined poem by a world-class poetess who always knows how to write such a unique standalone poem. A world-class poetess by the name of Rose Marie Juan Austin. And I thank you Rose Marie and a most well deserved 10 full score and it should be much more for poetry woven fine gold.

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 August 2020

transient the heart of drone this to that flower kissing the honey withering the petals (body of flower) deflowering by the humming, buzzing (beautiful song of life) running, flying all to illusory affection

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Shaun Cronick 10 August 2020

So worthy of another reread and to feel poetry enriched. Thanks again Rose Marie and another most deserved full score.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 August 2020

The title says it all this love is not to be trusted! the most suitable title for this poem. For every reader this is an entertaining and impressing poem, since the words are chosen perfectly

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 August 2020

and presented to show us the correct vision of a deceitful love. A 10 full score.and toMyPoemsList! Thank you so much for sharing, dear great poetess! I assure you that I'll come back to reread this loveliest poem once again!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2020

Opposite side of true love has been candidly expressed here in this wonderful poem! Beautifully put....5 stars.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 August 2020

Love and art! ! ! Muse of someone at hand. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Yes, dear poetess, deceitful love is lika a drop of dew that clings to a beautiful flower. The dew will disappear soon the sun rises....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 15 August 2020

Ah what a lovely expression! On to My Poems List

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 August 2020

A wonderfully composed piece, having the qualities of a lovely poem. Truly exceptional....10++❤️❤️❤️

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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