Decrepit Plains Poem by Laz Dixon

Decrepit Plains

Rating: 3.8


A bitter but calm wind stretches its reach among the gentle hills

Catching the long grass that wishes it could leave its past behind and drift along with the cool breeze
The wind glides past the ancient stones, now fallen, scattered and overgrown
they reminisce of times long past where they were once a strong refuge mightier than any howling gust

Nearby, Atop of the hill, the wind passes swiftly over the grave-like stumps and threads its way through the tall, thin trees who are next in line

The iced weary earth rumbles, its slumber distributed
its cold heart starts to beat and every blade of grass shivers in fear

The swift wind blows past this sacred land, unaware of the lost memories it has awakened

Thursday, July 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: change,memory,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 21 July 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A tale of movement of bitingly cold but calm winter wind well depicted in the poem. A good one indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 16 July 2015

A nicely written piece, Laz

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Rishad Mk 16 July 2015

A nice poem about wind. The journey of wind beautifully depicted.

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