Deep Blood Poem by Emmie From Neverland

Deep Blood

Rating: 5.0


So soft
Delicate
Tender
Peach flesh.

So soft to caress.
Delicate to my very touch.
Tender how I want it so much.
Peach flesh that is my joy to taste.

Canine
Magnetism
Puncture
Euphoric glow

Canine animalistic energy a flow.
Magnetism that makes me want you so.
Puncture your neck till I am weak.
Euphoric glow that stings your cheeks

Ferrous
Lusty
Gluttonous
Gratified delight

Ferrous liquid laps gently
Lusty desire like a disease
Gluttonous appetite makes me astray
Gratified delight permeates my primal insatiable need.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mustafa Ghuneim 28 May 2009

this is very delicate, I loved the rhyme..

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 31 October 2008

did you read yunus! Ask those who know Ask those who know, what's this soul within the flesh? Reality's own power. What blood fills these veins? Thought is an errand boy, fear a mine of worries. These sighs are love's clothing. Who is the Khan on the throne? Give thanks for His unity. He created when nothing existed. And since we are actually nothing, what are all of Solomon's riches? Ask Yunus and Taptuk what the world means to them. The world won't last. What are You? What am I?

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Tulay Beyhan 07 October 2008

As iwas reading your poem, i was listening to ''I Will Follow You İ nto The Dark'' by Death Cab For Cutie. ''Love of mine, someday you will die, but I'll be close behind, I'll follow you into the dark. No blinding light, or tunnels to gates of white, just our hands clasped so tight, Waiting for the hint of a spark.'' I quated the lyrics because it was matching and please listen that song because the emotions, the poem you wrote is as amazing as that song! Have a great day! Keep writing!

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Shimon Weinroth 06 October 2008

so many emotions and notions enchanting and luring well done wait until you have eaten all the genetically improved foods and are cloned for the next millenium, cheers Shimon

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