Treasure Island

laurajayne Kennedy

(06/01/1986 / south wales)

deep down


falling down
deep in the ocean
further and further you sink
into obliviation.

The waves wash over you
your drowning
you cant think,
dont know what is happening.

You dont realise until it's too late
until you've sunk so low
that you cant escape/

No way out
no way back
your lost in the ocean
your way off track.

you sink so low
you are lost forever
you say goodbye
to the world you knew
forever

Submitted: Monday, December 06, 2004
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