Mohammed AlBalushi

Rookie - 45 Points (5/2/1973 / Muscat- Oman)

Deep Love - Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

Deep Love

Flowers have blossomed shoots
Leaves shaken the remnants of snow
Water returned running in the river
The bears wakeup from slumber
Salmon on their way to the ocean
Life returned again
Your ove is still in the womb of my heart
Cord connected with all my body
Fueled by love and tenderness
Grow up in every moment, seconds
Grow up more and more
Spreads deep down
occupied each atom in my body
Take me from my toe
And raise up to my head
Yes, your love own me
Own me from deep


Comments about Deep Love by Mohammed AlBalushi

  • Silver Star - 3,889 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/29/2013 10:30:00 AM)

    Amazing poem with imagery. I likd how u fittd d atom in yor poem, makes it sci-luv. Kudos. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Silver Star - 3,703 Points Soumita Sarkar (11/24/2013 3:24:00 AM)

    Take me from toe........is marvellous............Liked it...Thanks for sharing.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (11/16/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    I like the way you describe it through a very good choice of words
    it sounds so romantic, deep and full of tenderness
    a very beautiful poetry (Report) Reply

Read all 3 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 13, 2013


[Hata Bildir]