Deep Water Epithalamium Poem by C Richard Miles

Deep Water Epithalamium



Idling, in the un-plumbed depths,
The gargantuan leviathan slumbers,
Every silver-finned dweller of the deep
Thrills, in uncountable numbers,
In restless, breathless anticipation
For the proximate, long-told approaching
That is the festive, nuptial union
Of the King and Queen of the Ocean.

Now the proud procession passes;
Kelp-bedizened denizens assemble;
Dainty, painted sea-anemones file past,
Writhing, waving tentacles a-tremble.
Now march in the groom’s attendants;
Sea-monsters, wreathed in salt-sprayed wrack,
Observed by shy, long-clawed supporters:
Hermit crabs, with conch shells on their backs.

Jaunty pipefish, sailor-like approach
Writhing past, in serried-rank array,
Sport five-striped, jade-bejewelled apparel,
And reedy, naval-hornpipe dances play.
Snapping, red-backed lobsters pay attendance
With their laughing, clapping, Spanish castanets
And angler-fish shed light upon the scene,
Illuminating eerily the parapets.

The curtseying ballerina jellyfish,
The bridal party, now arrives in state
Elegantly whirling, in twirling pirouettes,
On pebble-strewn, marble promenade.
Darting, opalescent gobies zoom and whizz,
The flaxen-tressed, fair mermaid-bride to see,
Amazing the spectators as they rush,
Untrammelled, with tremendous velocity.

The great whale serenades the august event
And, opening wide his giant, baleen throat
In rumbling, tumbling, ocean-rending song:
Unnatural in tone, yet nature’s deepest note,
Unites the massing, sub-aquatic host,
In peerless, euphonic encomium
To Neptune and his spouse, his tribute bearing
In this deep-water epithalamium.

Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: marriage,sea
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My very first poem (well at least since I left school) .
Having been asked to teach English, I went on a course (as you do!) .
The facilitator gave us lots of ideas, including playing music & getting the students to write along to it - this poem (edited the evening afterwards) was the result.

We were not told the name of the piece of music until afterwards. It turned out to be 'From the Depths sound the Great Sea Gongs by the composer Gareth Farr, from New Zealand. Amazingly, I managed to pick up the 'underwater' theme from the music and imagined the Wedding scene which is described in the poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C Richard Miles 14 November 2008

Note: This was the first ever poem I wrote in January 2008, whilst on a course. We were played a piece of music and asked to write about what it made us think of. I wrote this. The name of the piece, revealed after I wrote the poem, was 'From the Depths Sound the Great Sea Gongs' by the New Zealand composer Gareth Farr. He obviously made the music sound as if it came from beneath the sea.

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