Definitely, Zero Degrees Poem by Sandra Feldman

Definitely, Zero Degrees

Rating: 5.0


Take my hand
I'm slowly falling,
Promised land?
No longer calling
Far away, the dreams are moaning,
Far away, my love is falling
Gone away, in early morning
God, I pray,
Can't keep on mourning
Sadness grips,
There is no dawning
From my eyes,
Tears are so storming,
What to do?
There's no returning
Back to where,
Love was once burning
Ashes smolder,
You grow colder
Sweet repose,
Come take me over
What to do,
When all love's over,
And you find
That nothing matters,
Once all dreams
Are gone and shattered!
And the Wind,
Is so much colder.

Friday, May 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 04 May 2018

Poetry is good therapy : -0 (Definitely)

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Susan Williams 04 May 2018

I hope this poem has no basis in your personal life because this poem is on fire with agony. Love falling apart is one of the most tragic experiences in a human's lifetime and takes a long time getting to the other side. 10+++++++ as a poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 May 2018

Dear Sandra, such a well crafted poem....10++++

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Robert Murray Smith 04 May 2018

Sandra, reality is cold but that's where we all should be.

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