Defused Dacoity Poem by Vijay Sai R

Defused Dacoity



Not much crowd
After lunch time
Transactions very little
Accounts work only
Two post meridiem time it was
Bank shutters half closed
Security men relaxing
Everyone feeling dosed
Being saturday noon
So sudden
When four gunmen
Stormed into the place
Evading security men
Threatening every staff
Showing gun point
Looting money aplenty
No one could resist
Fleeing as soon as possible
Twenty four hours later
Purposeful policemen
Surrounding apartment
Where the convicts dwell
Opening fire in self defence
Knocking them all
Dacoit men all dead
All these happened
At one ante meridiem midnight
Wiping away countrymen fears
Promising every civilian
No such desperate looting hereafter

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jt Kaniarz 05 March 2012

Your poem seems to have alot of personal emotions about a certain place in life it speaks like it has sorry and upset but also knows how to look past very emotional but good in discription

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Eric Cockrell 26 February 2012

very graphic poem, tells the story well!

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Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) 27 February 2012

very well written....i can visualize the whole incident....keep writing.. :)

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Surbhi Bawaria (ahana) 27 February 2012

n yea...plz do read my poem pain of heart...

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Rishit Desai 28 February 2012

Wonderful thought and satire

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Yours Forever X 12 January 2013

I'm sorry I don't quite understand what the poem's about but whatever it's about it's a great poem as you can feel a different emotion in each line. well done! !

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Yours Forever X 12 January 2013

I'm sorry I don't quite understand what the poem's about but whatever it's about it's a great poem as you can feel a different emotion in each line. well done! !

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Lexie Bousman 04 June 2012

i love ur poem nice word choice.

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Mariposa Jonathan 21 March 2012

YOUR POEM PAINTS A VIVID PICTURE I CAN ACTUALLY VISUALIZE THESE EVENTS TAKING PLACE

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Lusekelo Simwela 06 March 2012

nice imagery, its fantastic

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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