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Deja VU by onelia avelar

12/2/2008 8:23:03 PM
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Deja VU
 
  While....................................walking
on the street............................today
i saw my features.............imprinted
on an elder................woman`s face
like simple......................copy-paste
of nose, ......................cheek-bones,
eyebrows, ........................my mouth
....................................heart-shaped
on a barely.............crumpled sheet,
walking past...................each other
long seconds of...glance exchange
Encounter.......like.............a deja vu...
Was..... I a deja vu to her..........then;
coming from her past life, .......too? ....

Sofia, the 13. June 2008

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Giuseppe Mastroianni (11/8/2008 12:24:00 AM)
I like this poem. Everything's just so good.
The deja vu feeling is well expressed thanks to the writing-style used by you that let the reader enter inside the flow of your thoughts.
Roland Bastien (9/28/2008 2:40:00 PM)
Good idea on the form and the visual effect.....much more to do in that formula...explore it in the future

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