Delectation (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Delectation (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


eating prickly-pear
at sunset—solar amber
succulent in blue

Monday, September 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: fruit,joy,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 18 April 2016

amber and blue A beautiful haiku That's my favourite colour combination. And the bonus of sunset too! Superb Tom Billsborough

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Terry Craddock 21 November 2015

Fruitful Poetic Tastes Speak In Words swift comments kept wing flying away into poems instantly born in trance like empathy as varied as a salad bowl taste fruit day Copyright © Terence George Craddock

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Terry Craddock 18 September 2015

The comments kept flying away into poems instantly born in empathy. Summer Sunset Taste Bud Flavours succulent flavours of amber hue summer sunset run in prickly pear sticky stream river dew mind soul buds raspberries watermelon kiwi fruit taste Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'Delection' by Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 17 September 2015

succulent flavours of amber hue summer sunset, run in prickly pear sticky stream river dew, raspberries watermelon kiwi fruit taste mind buds soul

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