Delicacy Of Life Poem by Obed dela Cruz

very nice philosophical poem about life, Obed, lovely to read.10. Mari

You're a very talented writer my friend. Keep up the fine work.. Regards, Trade.

Though young you are, your thoughts are well matured.

A picture of the ups and downs in life written with mature thoughts beyond your years with a finnese you have to write a well constructed poem regards

Yours is a nascent mind Obed, and at such a young age!

well done! that's a new unique piece i'm waitin for new issues & more deep.KEEP IT UP & EXCELLENT.

not every one gets sweetness

Nice one. I prefer not to swallow my own tears? Anyways good.

Captures man's frailty very well.

I found myself enjoying wormwood’s bitterness Thinking that it is the sweetest life can give me. For too long I partook the bread of dire falseness Knowing falsely that I ate life’s delicacy. Sounds like a medieval setting or Gothic. Would have been interesting if you had expanded on the first stanza with another stanza to expand those ideas. 10