Delightful Would Poem by Asif Baloch

Delightful Would

Rating: 5.0


Delightful would it be
to me
that I might be the
pollen of rose
to spread the love through
butterflies feet
and withered to give life to
new buds

delightful would it be
to me
that I might watch the
heaving waves
drown in the depths of
ocean wide
to become the part of
those lost souls

delightful would it be
to me
that I might reach the
mountain top
to feel the highs of
the peak
and give myself to
foamy clouds

delightful would it be
to me
that I might watch my
shattered image
to wipe of tears from those
swollen eyes
and encourage myself to take
one last breath

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 17 June 2009

Poem is delightful but the ending is touchy Asif.10+++

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Lady Grace 18 June 2009

beauifully composed with words so gentle..grace

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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2009

a heart felt warming poem well penned with passion cheers

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Delightful would it be for me to comment on your beautiful crafted poem Asif. Each stanza is the same length and the imagery you have provided for me, the reader, is glorious. Thank you for this. 10 Karin Anderson

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

a poem filled with great emotions as always Asif! ! ! ! ... I like such ones... we can feel your emotions flowing throw your words! ! 1 10+++ regards shan

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Anjali Sinha 20 June 2009

wowwwwww asif such a pure delight to read this so heart tuchhhhhhhhhhhhing --10 anjali

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Such heartfelt and moving poem Asif. You have crafted it so beautifully and it really touched me! 10 Karin Anderson

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