Warren Falcon

Rookie - 496 Points (04/23/52 - xxxx / Spartanburg, South Carolina, USA)

Delusion Of One - Poem by Warren Falcon

Born: Year of the Dragon.
Horoscope: 'Today's the lucky day.'

Luck, you say? O.K. Once. In a small town
on a snowy road, the scenery spinning round.
When it stopped you were pointing toward a good
place - Home. The message: Go back.
You can decide again to begin again
or stay warm there: Wombtown, population: 1.
No Lions Club or local Jaycees.
No chocolate bars and brooms for the blind.
Free room and board. It's kick and dream,
kick and dream and cleanliness more efficient
than a space suit. Talk about luck?

You're here aren't you? Don't say good or bad.
It's no accident the year's the Dragon's.
Chinese or no, the year has a tail long as a river.
Peel the scales behind the ears
you'll still roar for pain o roaring boy
spinning in the world, the recurring dream
of vortices whirling pink and red, a large
mouth with teeth spitting you into
an even muddier river. You'd fish it
if you could. More likely you'd dam it
at the source. The occasional catch is
more likely snag in undertow.

It's undertow that matters.
The real power's there.
Ask the undertow, you'll get answers.
Don't say need. The bottom's filled
with old cars, tin cans, bad seed.
All you'll ever want. Get lucky.

This is the day. The glass on the window's
steamed. Outside's a blur. What's that gone by
spinning with rustling wings, roaring like wind,
glint of mirrors hurling down? You'd swear
there was a splash. Something's pointing,

Go back.


Comments about Delusion Of One by Warren Falcon

  • Rookie - 75 Points R. H. Peat (7/11/2010 2:20:00 PM)

    A very interesting poem Warren. I like your use of metaphors to depict difficulties. they work well. Also victim poetry needs to alway offer something beyond just being a victim; which your poem suggest to me. Thanx for sharing. Please comment on one of my poems; I've newly posted poems here.

    a poet friend
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, January 20, 2012


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