Demented Ramblings Poem by Juan Olivarez

Demented Ramblings

Rating: 5.0


If you do not listen,
You will not hear.
If you are foolish,
You won't feel fear.

If you won't look,
You cannot see.
If you are caged,
You are not free.

If you won't knock,
The door stays shut.
When knives are dull,
They will not cut.

If ye won't seek,
Thou shall not find.
If you've gone crazy,
You've lost your mind.

If you've read this,
You've wasted your time.
There's nothing deep,
In this little rhyme.

10/24/10 Alton Texas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Wisniewska 12 September 2011

YES! has stuff to say, and \LOVE the twist/surprise at the end! should read out loud v well and audience won't fall asleep!

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Bert Bell 08 November 2010

I just came back because my 10 vote didn't show the first try. This is good one.10

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Bert Bell 04 November 2010

Very funny, Juan. You got me good :) 10

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