abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 57 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Departing - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

In and around me
I failed to see any
True devotee, true heart
Chanting Hare Rama, Hare Krishna.

I hoped for a vision
Fortuned with a commotion
Hi-tex, multiplex, complex
Aiding Hare Rama, Hare Krishna.

It seemed as a market
A perfect commercial market
As though contract
Contract with Rama, Krishna.

Spritual game is over
Athiest are on move
Breaking the centre
Centre of Rama, Krishna.


Comments about Departing by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Rookie Divya Divya B (11/12/2011 6:37:00 AM)

    you have told the reality what is happening now. good work (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie lover of poetry sweet (10/13/2011 1:03:00 AM)

    we are moving away from a force. good keep it up your thoughts sir (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, June 10, 2011


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