Kranthi Pothineni


Departure - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

It’s time to say bye
To all my ally
On whom I always rely
Even in time of wry
They make me feel high

This month of July
My heart feels dry
Along with wet eye
Which I can’t deny
It maybe my silent reply

To their warmth supply
Which I can’t even buy
With millions of pie
I will never find a tie
Even to their simply hi

It’s not a lie
Nor it’s a sly
It’s a true imply
Of my hearts cry
To trust hire any spy

Now its time to fly
Into new land of sky
But they will stay by
Even after this goodbye
In my heart until I die


Comments about Departure by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (1/12/2010 11:10:00 AM)

    Sad poem…rhymed nicely …sorrows are and will be there...and thro’ it poets’ wreath poems…
    10
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  • Rookie Catrina Heart (7/7/2009 8:13:00 AM)

    Now its time to fly
    Into new land of sky
    But they will stay by
    Even after this goodbye
    In my heart until I die
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    fantastic rhyme scheme...a great farewell...wish to borrow this someday! 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (7/7/2009 2:45:00 AM)

    Nice flow and
    rhyme (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/6/2009 10:53:00 PM)

    deep thought fine to ponder on (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lee Crowell (7/6/2009 9:02:00 PM)

    Kranthi the effort to maintain the same rhyming flow with each line I'm afraid has detracted from the heart of the message. And usually I'm blown away by your work, but sorry this one didn't do it for me. But please message me when you post more work, I know that there will be more to come. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,034 Points Louis Rams (7/6/2009 4:33:00 PM)

    i am sorry, but this one is beyond my comprhension. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (7/6/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    leaving the college. it will stay with you for many years.good write
    voted10
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  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (7/6/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    leaving the college. it will stay with you for many years.good write
    voted10
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  • Rookie - 164 Points Joseph Poewhit (7/6/2009 4:23:00 AM)

    Time to enter and exit the stage of life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (7/6/2009 1:11:00 AM)

    Nice poem with good rhyme. Keep up the good work, Kranthi. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Janell Cressman (7/6/2009 12:57:00 AM)

    AMAZING! ! ! ! ! ! !
    I like how it's almost all a big rhyme,
    life is some times hard but if it were easy we wouldn't be as strong.
    really amazing poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (7/6/2009 12:02:00 AM)

    nice to read kranthi............ you are writing immensely and profoundly...... also when time permits read my In Poem Hunter..........a tribute....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ch J Satyananda Kumar (7/5/2009 11:50:00 PM)

    Very nice poem with a good rhyme and rhythm. Kudos. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted M (7/5/2009 11:40:00 PM)

    Departure! ! Going away from loved ones family and friends is really killing.
    Some of them you gonna after quite some time, and some of the friends you may not get a chance to see for a long long time as people move in search of better opportunities. Nice Write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 5, 2009



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