Christianne Balk


Departure Poem by Christianne Balk


Thousands of tiny
fists tamping the surface of the lake
flowing like a wide
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Comments about this poem (Departure by Christianne Balk )

  • Rookie - 245 Points Lawerence Mize (4/15/2014 5:04:00 PM)

    Enjoyed the imagery in this one. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,175 Points Paul Reed (4/15/2014 3:51:00 AM)

    Very descriptive, lots of colours, paints a picture with words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Briana Knight (4/15/2012 4:18:00 PM)

    I love it. Very good imagry. You may hear that all the time but it's true. Can you read my work and tell me how to improve? Thanx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points Jan Hauck (4/15/2012 4:11:00 AM)

    I do not know why this poem has such a low rating. This is exactly the kind of poetry and language to be proud of. Great poem, on par with Sylvia Plath, I think. (Report) Reply

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