your heart and you,
made of stone.
went away
leaving me alone.
not even said 'goodbye',
not even once.
you wanted to go away
far from my glance.
there is a void,
there is my voice,
which asks you,
'why you made this choice? '
your train has arrived,
and will depart soon,
i will be left behind
tearful and loon...
nicely done i like one thing in your poem the endings... they are simply awesome, amusing, suprising, nostalgic, and sometimes terryfying, ! ! keep penning sister...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I thought the poem to be well put. I like your style. I wish I knew better formations of poetry my-self. Well done.