Departure And Dismay Poem by michael hartman

Departure And Dismay

Rating: 4.5


Amber drifts through the atmosphere.
Miles grew farther apart.
You were safe in the balmy wings of an osprey,
I slept through your departure.

Change came in the form
Of a tainted resolution.
Loneliness spread his starvation,
His prolific empire.
Trees lap against
My one dust window pane,
Sounding the language of a liar.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer Hartman 03 November 2007

Very sad poem. I like the fluidity of the lines a lot. I especially like the last three lines...very interesting image and impression

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Chloe Duryea 01 November 2007

This poem makes me think of lovers painfully parted on an autumn afternoon. I especially love the line: 'Loneliness spread his starvation, His prolific empire.', because it speaks so clearly of resignation to emotional impoverishment on the heels of love recognized. And then I wonder, in the last line, whether the trees have beguiled him, or whether he is questionning the illusory quality of transformational love?

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