Depression Poem by Robert c. Davis

Depression

Rating: 5.0


Depression, a crow amongst the dead branches of an apple tree
Amidst a medow teeming with life.
A young rose plant never having the chance to grow
For born in the cold of winter, far below the trees, no sun.
Two fawns, left orphan to the oncoming headlights
Mother stood not a chance now nor do children.

A young boy, cancer bound, no smoke can his immune withstand
For his fathers addiction he'll pay.
Sons, daughters, without a chance to live with a father
For war has brought him down.
Greed beyond belief, no care for others lives,
power, land, power, land thats all the greedy see.

The fact that, you, I, we, all people could help
but choose to not help, were saving for that new toy, why donate?
The fact we let young children starve, leave them, forget them
they're from third world countries, not our fault, right?

So what has this world come to, what have we done
I'll tell you.
We've wasted our time, our effort, our breath
on materialized things forgetting what matters.
Life matters, people matter.
True depression.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachael Curtis 24 February 2010

Wow, this is a very deep and thought provoking piece! The examlpes and imagery are brillaint and ring to true to life and human nature. You tackle this issue with something that could almost be beauty, which in itself is thought provoking contrast! A fantastic, well written poem! Well done!

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Laila lili 25 January 2009

WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWoWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW for the end i really like it it was having so much honestly words expression i will tell that i feel the impact in my soul and these words are no thing you take me for the world of no lies any more ireally dont know what to say about it 10+++++ keep it up layla

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Al Ramos 21 December 2008

True depression, you hit it right on the head and I too fall into that category of wanting to help but I am overhelmed as to who deserves it most.

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