Depression Poem by Dannielle Smedley

Depression

Rating: 5.0


He was depressed,
So was she,
She tried to help him,
He tried to help her,
But the more they tried,
The more they cried.
They spoke of suicide,
They spoke of how beautiful it’d be,
On the other side.
They began to fight,
Nothing was right,
They couldn't cope,
They were beginning to lose hope,
It was so hard for two sad people to be there for each other,
For there was so much negativity flowing through both of their brains,
And running through their bodies, was a whole lot of pain.
Death was a glorious thought to them both,
The thought from hanging from the rope,
It was all they could think of,
But the truth was,
They cared for one another,
They just couldn't help each other,
Because they were both in great sadness,
Which was slowly turning them into madness,
They both hated their life,
They both were so close to picking up that knife,
It was hard for them to understand,
That they were meant to be on this land,
They had no reason to believe so,
They thought that they might as well just go,
Their fights began to affect them more,
Their words could be as painful as being chopped by a saw.
But, no matter what they may say,
She really loved him at the end of the day,
He was like a brother to her, who was always there,
And even though he may not believe it, she really does care,
For him to go would make her heart drop to her feet,
She wouldn't even be able to speak…
If he were gone,
She’d feel so sick and torn,
He needs to know this,
That if he left,
He would be dearly missed,
And that she cares so much,
And that she needs him to be strong,
Because he is wrong,
Hes amazing,
Wonderful,
Handsome,
And all the good words under the sun,
He just has forgotten how to have fun.
Happiness is a hard thing to find,
When you’re sad all the time,
But she wants to help him through this,
As hard as it’ll be,
She knows that patience is the key,
A depressed boy and girl,
Struggling to cope in this insane world.
Hoping things get better,
They need to know,
That they’ll always
Have each other.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sorry that this isn't exactly the best poem, but I wrote this to show people to ALWAYS be there for one another, we all need someone in our life, and we all do have someone, but sometimes it's hard to talk to someone who is suffering from depression, as well as you, but you must remember to stick by each other's side. No one deserves to go through depression like this.
I am also so sorry that this is rather long, I suppose because it tells a meaningful story. Enjoy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dannielle Smedley 19 August 2013

Yes, that is true @Pradip. Thank you!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 19 August 2013

there's always a light at the end of the tunnel. You're spot on Dannielle.10/10.

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