Designer Love Poem by Brandon Adamson

Designer Love

Rating: 3.5


Very well I contradict myself
knock myself out
looking for a knockout
won't settle for a knockoff
a friendship bracelet
is never enough
in a department store
busy shopping for
I need your
designer love.
immortal while we're shopping

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abderrahmane Dakir 05 January 2016

LOL. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed with it.

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Manonton Dalan 05 January 2016

powerful.I hope it works......

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Susan Williams 05 January 2016

This was playful! Imaginative way to get your point across. Very well written

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Rajnish Manga 05 January 2016

Very well said. We agree with the poet's contention that what is needed is unadulterated love in a relationship. All else is secondary. Following expression is quite eloquent: a friendship bracelet is never enough

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 January 2016

Wonderful as well as meaningful and demanding muse. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 January 2016

Cute drop! ! .Nice reading! !

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