Desire Within Poem by Alison Smith

Desire Within

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We travel our life our emotions on show
Many tug then to and fro
But what of the desire within
How do we reach that pool?

The bodies writhe to and fro
Their want is apparent
But what of the desire within
How is that expressed?

We find true love
Our outer desires are nourished
But what of the desire within
How is that fed?

What are our deepest wants?
They are greater than that of the body
Finding a soul mate will that help?
What is our greatest desire?

The strength to stand and be heard
The ability to rise above the evil
The power to soar to the peak
That is our desire within........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ying Escalona 02 August 2007

desire...its a nice word to hear....but it goes with craving...and my desire? the world under :) true

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Margaret Alice 31 July 2007

Like Victor Frankl wrote, our greatest desire is to rise above evil so that we can remain strong in any situation; even a concentration camp; where he made a choice not to be debased to the level of an aggressive animal living by the motto 'survival of the fittest'; but remained courteous and kept his dreams alive by compiling his book in his mind. The power of his imagination enabled him to survive deprivation by dreaming about his wife while suffering - he had the power to soar to the peak. Your poem is an excellent presentation of a positive philosophy; I appreciate it so much! Kind regards, Margaret.

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Marci Made 31 July 2007

My this is a good one....we have to look within to satisfy our own needs before we can be open to another...This is grand and look there's another Marcia [mar see a] beneath me here...Time difference and all I miss many of yours...it's so late for me now, trying to catch up from the weekend away.....and now peeked back at first page before signing out..Great poem as always from you ~~~love, marci.xo

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Marcia Morris 31 July 2007

Ejoyed this read from start to finish. Great write....nice ending!

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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