Destiny Poem by R S

Destiny

Rating: 4.5


Destiny is the reason we meet
The purpose is unknown
But the marks it leaves lasts long

Supposed to be a fantasy
Unrealistic... so not practical
A break from the monotony
The sweetness was meant to be enjoyed 
Before the miraculous feelings fade over time

Alas it all ended ridiculously
Certainly control is out of question
How fate plays with our hearts!

What if it ends over its course of time 
It would have left some positive impact 
The thrill, excitement and memories for a lifetime 

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shihabudheen K J 03 November 2012

much of things happen over destiny..........what if our destiny brings us a tree of pleasure and its branches full of love and understanding......

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 13 June 2012

a well constructed structure i like the way you have bought the concept into act. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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