Destiny That Comes In Folds Poem by Melanie Emikohe

Destiny That Comes In Folds

Rating: 5.0


A trick of destiny entices
when the way is decided;
a pool of wine in a cup~
spills the rest, forsaken.

At defeat, a subtle slap
is rare, in folds storming;
as if a lightning, thunder,
razed farm, loss of living.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cecil (cj) Krieger 30 November 2006

What a beautifully written poem... a 10! Best CJ

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Goldy Locks 30 October 2006

hi Mel! fun write. brevity of verse makes it compelling. xxtra so. rhythm? yes, we got that =]..keep on, Sus

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