Treasure Island

s./j. goldner

(March 2nd,1984 / USA)

destructive


she’s a martyr
a prophet
a poet

but

she shattered her
future, her confidence, her courage.

he’s a hero
a lover
an idiot

but

he shattered his
future, his confidence, his courage

together
they shattered their passion.

Submitted: Tuesday, May 23, 2006
Edited: Thursday, May 25, 2006

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  • Brian Dorn (6/3/2006 12:47:00 PM)

    Sus, heros tend to steal a martyr's thunder, especially if they act like an idiot... interesting write! !
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Maxim Muyu (5/30/2006 3:40:00 AM)

    I can imagine the destructive forces behind our minds, like Ayn Rand said of the unbearable volition in our mind's that is found in the natural world and their power's fade, since in this poem the great prophet's can learn if not careful they can go astray from the true supernatural volition and melodrama. (Report) Reply

  • Kee Thampi (5/26/2006 12:47:00 AM)

    You made a best poem. Real poem is a gift of a open mind. Flow of words.Real gift of God (Report) Reply

  • Adryan Rotica (5/24/2006 1:03:00 AM)

    I think this is unique Sus....I'm going to get therapy now...as usual your insight rings clear. (Report) Reply

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