s./j. goldner

Rookie (March 2nd,1984 / USA)

Destructive - Poem by s./j. goldner

she’s a martyr
a prophet
a poet


she shattered her
future, her confidence, her courage.

he’s a hero
a lover
an idiot


he shattered his
future, his confidence, his courage

they shattered their passion.

Comments about Destructive by s./j. goldner

  • Rookie Alexzia Ferdinand (12/2/2006 5:16:00 PM)

    i love this..the simplicity blends it all together....very poignant....write on! Alexzia (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Alexzia Ferdinand (12/2/2006 5:14:00 PM)

    i love this..the simplicity blends it all together....very poignant....-Alexzia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Brian Dorn (6/3/2006 12:47:00 PM)

    Sus, heros tend to steal a martyr's thunder, especially if they act like an idiot... interesting write! !
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - -1 Points Maxim Muyu (5/30/2006 3:40:00 AM)

    I can imagine the destructive forces behind our minds, like Ayn Rand said of the unbearable volition in our mind's that is found in the natural world and their power's fade, since in this poem the great prophet's can learn if not careful they can go astray from the true supernatural volition and melodrama. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,177 Points Kee Thampi (5/26/2006 12:47:00 AM)

    You made a best poem. Real poem is a gift of a open mind. Flow of words.Real gift of God (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,213 Points Uriah Hamilton (5/25/2006 6:31:00 PM)

    Maybe we all kill what we love, maybe we all kill ourselves. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 313 Points Adryan Rotica (5/24/2006 1:03:00 AM)

    I think this is unique Sus....I'm going to get therapy now...as usual your insight rings clear. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 25, 2006

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