Determination Poem by Driven Endowed

Determination

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Determination wheels one's success,
It's the core that drive our muse;
Helm the chest with boldness,
Where no fear woo the courage,
Mockery is a stepping stone to success;
Fear streghten the ironic acquintance,
Boldness depress mediocre ideology,
Whilt determination has cracked the tonic toxicology.

Tuesday, September 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 October 2015

The essence of determination well depicted in the poem. It's a well articulated and nicely encapsulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. Determination is the grease that oils the wheel of success. Wherever and wherever the mind is determined, fear becomes an inconsequential shadow devoid of substance. A lovely piece bristling with knowledge. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Driven Endowed 12 October 2015

Hi Poet Chinedu Dike, I concur to your analysis, well analysed sir!

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Driven Endowed 12 October 2015

Hi Poet Chinedu Dike, I concur to your comments, well analysed sir!

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