Determined! Poem by shimon weinroth

Determined!

Rating: 5.0


lightning struck
lights out, time out
zapped,
fuses blown,

in the aftermath
thunder rumbled,
temper growled
wind howled,

shook by storms outside
trembled under covers,
warm and insecure,
how small we are

still, in the world of no control
shiver and shake
before the wake,
of nature's angry forces,

saw the light, heard the thunder
wondered how much longer it
would take to rise above the waves
and swim to shores,

and rule
the bellowing
forces
yet unchained

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Threadgold 12 October 2008

Hi Shimon. Determination against unchained forces. I like the play on words it has a ring to it. a good read. Regards Dave T.10/10

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