Devil And The Beast Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Devil And The Beast

Rating: 4.5


Sitting and waiting
first for the sun
Then for the moon

Just wishing
your life away
waiting for another day

Lifes not a game
but you got caught
In a same day play
Needle to the vain
take away the pain

You should
have been cared for
But they just turned away
Left you to the devil
who made you this way

But one day
their fate will come
They'll get whats coming
when the devil turns on them

Then you'll no longer
have to wait for the sun and the moon
You'll be free from the pain
The devil and the beast

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malaya Roses 28 March 2012

What goes up... must come down... Almost me.. this is more than life reflection... Suggestive and provocative; the poet is reaching out with his own way! ! ! Excellent write.

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Ambrose Venessa 21 March 2012

I think I get the message of the poem, it speaks of an addicted fellow who is rejected by the world. It really moved me! If my explanation wasn't good enough pls tell me

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Drew Swartz 20 March 2012

loved it Dave! just loved it!

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Ra Jan 20 March 2012

Grate I like it keep going.....................

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Eric Cockrell 19 March 2012

brings back hard memories, well done!

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