Dews Poem by lily peace lago every by to ph

Dews

Rating: 4.6


Falling on the earth
the colourless pearls
over the lush green grasses
and on the leaves and colourful flowers
in deep silence stay alive
for the first ray taketh in lap...

In shy and in shine
open the eyes
when the lucid white glitter in the sky
the lusty fall of the ray
fondle her in great joy
in oneness with thy
going over and above
you always glitter in shy
and ever shine...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 22 September 2009

It shines like a dew dropp kissing the first ray of rising sun, lago lago.....

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Raj Arumugam 24 September 2009

a lovely moment in nature and life, Lagolago

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Gillena Cox 24 September 2009

the Dew has cast its magic spell on you; a lovely sharing Lago Lago

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A beautiful poem with wonderful imagery that evokes magic as it weaves it's way into my heart. 10 love Karin

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 March 2010

Dewy … twee… buoy … wonderful enjoyed Ms. Nivedita UK PS 10++

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Walterrean Salley 26 December 2009

Such a delightful gem.

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Ranjit Ravindran 03 November 2009

Nice description Ma'am. As a young kid one of my favourite activity was to play with dew on leaves!

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I Am Charlie 31 October 2009

with the charm of a dew drop... Uncomplicated, and simple.

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Eyan Desir 05 October 2009

This was sweet I liked it Good write 10s

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