Dhadkan! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Dhadkan!

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Ek intezaar tha
Un lamhon ka
Jo meri zindagi mein
Ek pyaar ki kiran ki tarah ayee
Mein aaj bhi un dhadkanooh Ko mehsoos kar rahi hoon.

Raath ho chali thi
Andhera aur sannata chaaya hua tha
Aur mein sadak paar kar rahi thi
Achanak se ek haath ne mujhe
Unki aur kheech liya
Unki bahon mein
Mere dil ki dhadkan tej ho gayii
Aur aawaz aathe aathe gale tak rukh Gayee
Unki saasein bhi meri tarah tej thi
Maano mujhe dhak rahi ho
Jo mujhe mehsoos ho rahi thi.
Ek apnapan tha
Yaa. pyaar jhalkh raha tha
Jo mujhe kareeb se dekh rahe ho
Ek ajeeb se bechaini
Aur mein unko dekhthe hi reh gaye

Humari aankhein ek doosre se takra gayi
Per andhera humare beech me khambhe ki tarah khada tha
Jo humein aar paar nahin hone de raha tha
Per humari saasein eh doosre se takra rahi thi.

Awaaz se yuh lag raha tha
Woh mujhe sadiyon se jaantha ho.
Aur woh mujhe dil se chhahtha ho
Eaisa lag raha tha unki har
Dhadkan mujhe pyaar se pukkar rahi ho.
Aur unki aankhon ki gehrayee ki aur
Lay jaa rahi ho.

Aur unhone achanak se haath chuda liya
Aur hafthe huae awaaz mein kaha
Agar tumhein kuch ho jaatha toh
Woh gaadi tumhe kuchal jaathi toh
Aur mein dekhtha he reh jaatha
Aur tumhe kya pata key mei tum se........?
Bas itna kaha
Aur woh andhere mein goom ho gaya.

Pata nahin un lamhon ko
Mein kabhi bhool nahi payee
Unki tej saase gawah hai
Jo mujhe dhak rahi ho aaj bhi
Aapni pyaar mein.
Eaisa lag raha tha ki
Unki dhadkan tej thi
Mujhe apne paas paakar.
Kaash phir say
Woh lamhe meri zindagi
Mein vapas aa jaye
Aur mein phir se
Un pyaar mein rangna chhathi hoon.

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Sunday, September 8, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My hindi version Dhadkan!
My english version Heart Beats!

Purely my imagination. I wish you too to have beautiful imagination and comes in way of poem, which you share with readers like us. Thank you

Aswath, I hope my comments are proper this time..I hope I learnt to write comments....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2017

This is a beautiful love poem on hindi language having stunning and thrilling expression. Let me quote some lines.... Pata nahin un lamhon ko Mein kabhi bhool nahi payee Unki tej saase gawah hai Jo mujhe dhak rahi ho aaj bhi Aapni pyaar mein. Eaisa lag raha tha ki Unki dhadkan tej thi Mujhe apne paas paakar. Kaash phir say Woh lamhe meri zindagi Mein vapas aa jaye Aur mein phir se Un pyaar mein rangna chhathi hoon. I appreciate the penmanship of this poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 March 2017

Agar tumhein kuch ho jaatha toh A touching imagination, when a poet or a poetess imagines like this we get beautiful poems as it is.

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Shahzia Batool 08 September 2013

the exact parallel in both the versions...one can't feel the original out of the two...both are interpreting and representing your imagination...! ! ! being fortunate enough to read both, i enjoyed both the versions! ! !

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