When Is Time?
Is It Time?
Did I Die?
Yet My time is not up
Blacked out
Dead?
Yet found my way
Awoken
Crawled back
Alive
Questions
Answers
Not Quite right
Warm
So many to thank
Young Doctors
Who cared
Nurses too
Giving
A drive to survive
Knowing
So much more in life to do
Holding on
Each moment
Great to be alive
Life is too short
A will to survive
Thank You
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October 25th Lyn Paul
Inspirational write to hold onto life, so much to do, life is a gift of so much we can give, to love is to feel so alive! So many questions, life is about learning to find our own answers! Great write!
Here is me worrying about me dying and my Mum has died today. But I know that she has lived and now sleeps peacefully. x
Beautiful poem Lyn. A beautiful comeback to life after a black out. When a person survives, after a struggle, he feels thankful to life. As many more beautiful things yet to be done in life. Fantastic lines add beauty to the poem... Holding on Each moment Great to be alive Life is too short A will to survive Very true said, life is short and its really a great to be alive. Loved the positive message it conveys. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Thank you Lyn for the lovely and Inspiring comments for my poem.
Giving a drive to survive knowing so much with nice expression. Mysterious life is felt well and asked the question.
Our existence is a mystery. I like this poem. Kudos to the poet. Do write more and read mine also
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yet found my way, what was the time then? Very beautifully presented personal judgements. Nice job.