Did I Die? Poem by Lyn Paul

Did I Die?

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When Is Time?
Is It Time?
Did I Die?
Yet My time is not up
Blacked out
Dead?
Yet found my way

Awoken

Crawled back
Alive
Questions
Answers
Not Quite right



Warm
So many to thank
Young Doctors
Who cared
Nurses too

Giving
A drive to survive
Knowing
So much more in life to do

Holding on
Each moment
Great to be alive
Life is too short
A will to survive

Thank You




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October 25th Lyn Paul

Saturday, October 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mantu Mahakul 25 October 2014

Yet found my way, what was the time then? Very beautifully presented personal judgements. Nice job.

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Hazel Durham 29 October 2014

Inspirational write to hold onto life, so much to do, life is a gift of so much we can give, to love is to feel so alive! So many questions, life is about learning to find our own answers! Great write!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 November 2014

i find your spirit behind this poem

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Lyn Paul 03 November 2014

Here is me worrying about me dying and my Mum has died today. But I know that she has lived and now sleeps peacefully. x

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 November 2014

Beautiful poem Lyn. A beautiful comeback to life after a black out. When a person survives, after a struggle, he feels thankful to life. As many more beautiful things yet to be done in life. Fantastic lines add beauty to the poem... Holding on Each moment Great to be alive Life is too short A will to survive Very true said, life is short and its really a great to be alive. Loved the positive message it conveys. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it. Thank you Lyn for the lovely and Inspiring comments for my poem.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 30 October 2014

Giving a drive to survive knowing so much with nice expression. Mysterious life is felt well and asked the question.

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Babatunde Aremu 30 October 2014

Our existence is a mystery. I like this poem. Kudos to the poet. Do write more and read mine also

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