Did I Lie? Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Did I Lie?
From fire smoke takes birth
And from love pain blooms
Earth cracks without raindrops
But heart breaks with teardrops
Ha ha, how close are we to nature?
Hard wind breaks tree branches
And hard time breaks our hearts
All tree branches will grew again
But how true is it, in our case?
Ha ha, hearts don't have tongue
Day Night is part of his nature
And true lies is part of our nature
All his flowers blooms in night
But most of our flowers die in night
Funnily and finally many say I lie, Ha ha...
very interseting take on this poem, i really liked the iventiveness(i don't think thats a real word :)) and emganasion on this poem, awesome poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
A good comparison with the nature and the broken love of human beings.
like zoom of wind, finally never gone, but stay in our hand....you'll makes things possible in your poem....that always be remember... excellent that one has to read between each line to understand... the package in your mind...ha...ha....many got puzzled of what is fun and a command....God bless....a 10/10
nice conceptual metaphor And hard time breaks our hearts nice philosophical poem 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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