Did You Ever Love Me Poem by Darnaryel Fantaisie

Did You Ever Love Me

Rating: 5.0


Holding you inside my arms
I'll never do again
Telling you how much you count
Things will never be the same
Back to that moment my train crashed into you
I didn't feel the pain
Now my mind open I really wonder what remains...

Two lonely souls in the dark
Is it what you wanted?
You took everything you wanted
Do you have any regret?
I think the sky was blue the day you left without a care
the wind were blowing in your hair
I only want the truth, don't keep it secret...

Fall in love with you, I do not take it as a mistake cause now I'm perfectly prepared, I just want you to tell me this one thing, will you?

Did you ever show to me the feelings that I showed to you,
Coz I never saw
Did you ever said to me things that we normally do...
Did you ever shared with me even a few part of your heart
Coz now I can't remind...
No I can't remember...
I wonder: did you ever love me?

(to be continued...)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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