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*DID YOU PAY TO THEM TO CLICK ON YOU? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
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My home based on love, patients
honesty, and sincerity, made my whole
slowly, slowly as snail reach my goal
your name made by cheating
tomorrow soon it will fall,
within an hour you will reach by your army
you will be on top of all, poetry kids killedby you
click and click shot, and shot with no rule
my goal is loving ones being mate with my soul,
congrat. for your fall
TaMaRa JaY HaNaRiNg
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Elysabeth Faslund
(10/14/2009 7:12:00 PM) |
There is much truth in this. True poets write for themselves, and not in hopes of fleeting glory. For it is so fleeting, this time we have. And our words are our descendants.
Excellent! xxxxElys
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Hasmukh Amathalal
(10/14/2009 7:34:00 AM) |
slowly, slowly as snail reach my goal
your name made by cheating
tomorrow soon it will fall, ............... i think you are on loosing trail..giving so much .good piece...10
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Stanley Slavisc
(9/26/2009 10:54:00 AM) |
GRAMMAR AND SPELLING ERRORS?
DON'T BE DISRESPECTING THIS CHILD'S 'CULTURE'
AFTER ALL, THEY DON'T TEACH ENGLISH IN THE HOOD ANYMORE.
THEY TEACH: UMM, UMM, MMM! BARACK HUSSEIN OBAMA!
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Tai Chi Italy
(9/18/2009 3:06:00 AM) |
Right Tamara! I don't often do this but you brought your poetry to my attention and I am going to give my opinion. This is a good poem if it were not for all the grammer and spelling errors...
I also note the sheer volume of comments on this and other pieces you bring to our attention...I guess you have been heavily promoting your work? Not a bad thing, but it doesn't prove your popularity. You certainly do not need my added opinion, and if you do ask for it, I would be grateful, as I am sure many other of your readers would too, if you present such offerings, in the best possible light.
No offence meant. All the best to you in your poetic future
Smiling at you
Tai
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Olfa D.Philosophy
(8/31/2009 6:38:00 AM) |
When one is angry, his heart creates and excels, that's what you are doing. Keep your pen busy.
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Afzal Shauq
(7/11/2009 11:24:00 PM) |
within an hour you will reach by your army
you will be on top of all, poetry kids killedby you
click and click shot, and shot with no rule
my goal is loving ones being mate with my soul,
congrat. for your fall
again a good piece with reality touches.. well done dear tamara 10/10
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Kristina B; Williams
(7/11/2009 4:11:00 PM) |
oh my that was soul wretching yet so true...wisely put into a poem with so much feeling and expression..10
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Frank James Ryan, Jr.
(7/10/2009 4:59:00 PM) |
Poetry is not about numbers that any proficient user can tally-up at the blink of an eye...It doesen't serve as testimony to quality....not on this site. The TOP 500Poet's list is a flong-used scam, mostly by bopers who think that by padding their daily velocity performance, that it will somehow reap gold literary seeds for them. This could not be further from the truth...Poetic Truth comes from within the core & fibers of the hear which feeds off the right halve dominance of the human mind. Case in point is: Take a look as to who has more than 6,000 I.P. hits.....now check how many poems they have had on site over the past 2 weeks.....In the past week, (alegedly) , this individual with 3 names in one(The unholy trinity, i call him) has actually increased his daily padding ritual since he
stopped posting....Now, is this person 52 cards short of a full deck or what? lol! Anyway, we should all self-promote to a degree...and all of us should take pride in overachievement....and no one should think us aloof for wanting others to know how excited we may be about our achievement(s) .Keep that pen pumping, young lady & concentrate on topic & theme that will display the gifts you have, as a writer....Pay no mind to numbers, as they hold no poetic value, HERE.....And instead, pay all your mind to words, your words & the creative way you choose to structure them.
FjR
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